hena
Human
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Post by hena on Jan 22, 2006 12:01:55 GMT -5
As Amber walked along in the melting snow, she thought about why she was leaving. The nimphs were at home were not that accepting of her as she liked. She just wants to be loved. No matter who or what her father is. There was a noise behind her. She turned and saw that her little sister was following her."Why are you following me! You can't come!"
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Post by Sarita on Jan 22, 2006 12:05:17 GMT -5
do...do you kbnow the real Jacie? ? Do I know you? It didn't really show how you could use magic...but I've accepted one's that were worse than this one...so you're in...but if you break the rules...you're out!!!!!
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Post by TsUmI on Jan 22, 2006 12:08:05 GMT -5
It's...it's...a bit scattered...I mean. Your ideas are not very organized. You went from nimphs and accepting to who her father was... Then, BOOM. Little sister pops out. YELLS YELLS YELLS...yeah...you need some more practice I think...but it's really up to Sarita...
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Post by ||The|White|Owl|| on Jan 22, 2006 14:10:49 GMT -5
... -growls- ...
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Post by TsUmI on Jan 22, 2006 14:52:09 GMT -5
DO NOT FRINKING USE THE NAME JACIE! GOT IT?! CAPEESH?!
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